Passion explodes within his eyes
as I begin to wonder between his thighs
a deep breath and a teasing sigh
a want or need I cannot decide.
I’m screaming and yearning to feel him inside
his hands no longer shy
his kisses, his thrust – a natural high
he seduces my mind, body and soul
his actions and thoughts becoming more bold
my moans and cries I cannot withhold
holding and caressing I never want to let go.
I’ve never felt this way before
my entire body begs for more
and then as one, we fall motionless to the floor
his eyes dig deep inside mine, begin to explore
looking for the answer I’m sure
I know what it is he is looking for.
My eyes tell the story he wants to see
“Baby, it’s you, you’re all I need
I feel loved and safe, you have set me free
baby, I love you
you complete me”.
** The United Colours of Orgasm Thermal Nude by taiche
W.T.F. 
Um, wow!
Is that a “good” wow or a “this chick has lost it” wow? Lol…
It was a good wow and a “damn that was hawt” wow.
Awesome. I came across this poem the other day and realized I wrote it 13 yrs ago when my now husband and I were young and recklessly in love. It kind of lit a fire in me and I wanted to share that. I really wanted to write something today but couldn’t channel anything funny or otherwise so I took a gamble and shared this.
Ahhhh. I was/am a bit nervous about it! Lol.
I’ve written one poem sorta like this with another person. I was a bit apprehensive about publishing it, too.
So did you end up publishing it?
Yes, ma’am.
Thanks for commenting TD!!
Of course.
Powerful, sensuous and deeply emotive! Thank God you found this,it could have been lost forever, And thank-you so much for sharing your soul!
I like your description of “emotive”. That’s pretty much how I was feeling reading again for myself. Thanks for checking it out and offering feedback.
ahah on the ‘want or need’ part. I am pretty sure it was a memory of a want when you wrote that 😉
When you’re 19 and in love/lust, everything feels like a need. So dramatic I know. lol. Reading this poem, now at almost 33, it makes me smile. It also makes me smile knowing I married that young man I loved so passionately back then. Still do, but you know, marriage and two kids later…enough said.
Loved that!
Thanks Steph. It was a bit steamy but that’s why I loved it and wanted to share. Put me outside of my comfort zone which is a place I crave to be these days.
Certainly was steamy. You write really well
That’s a fantastic compliment…I’ll take it. Thank you!
Beautiful! I want to share this with my husband. Can I have your permission to write it in his valentines day card?
Ha! Absolutely. I’m quite flattered by that. Thank you.